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There is a moment in Go Set a Watchman that most readers never reach, that you might not have reached, where Jean Louise Finch stands in the balcony of the courthouse in Maycomb, Alabama. The same balcony she sat in as a child. But now, as an adult, she looks down and sees her father sitting with men she despises. Men who believe things she finds monstrous. Everything she thought she was built on is gone. But let’s understand that that moment was not created by Atticus Finch. It was created by Maycomb.

The period, the location, the history, the level of conflict were baked into the soil of that place and birthed that collision in that courtroom with those two people.

This is what setting does when a writer understands it, or at least describes it in their work. The setting ALWAYS produced the collision. And Robert McKee says it plainly in Story. Setting is never neutral. Every dimension of the world you build actively shapes what is possible, what is inevitable, and what is forbidden for the people who live inside it. Period, Duration, Location, Level of Conflict. Four dimensions.

Let’s walk through that teaching again.

Dimension One: Period

Maycomb, Alabama. Mid-1950s.

The South in the mid-1950s is a place that has survived things the rest of the country has not had to survive in the same way. It survived the Civil War and the humiliation of Reconstruction. It survived poverty that made the Depression feel, in some counties, like more of the same. And it survived the slow grinding work of building a life in the wreckage of a lost world and a compromised peace.

And it had built, across that long survival, a set of arrangements. Not just laws. Arrangements. Social, cultural, interpersonal arrangements that governed how people lived alongside each other across their profound and unresolved differences. These arrangements were unjust at their foundation, nobody can argue otherwise. But they were load-bearing. They held things up that would otherwise crash if suddenly removed.

Now into this world comes 1954 with Brown v. Board of Education and the Supreme Court of the United States declaring that the arrangement was unconstitutional. That it must end. Not gradually. Not organically. Now.

Maycomb hardens

This is crucial for your reading of this book. The white South’s resistance to integration in this period is not simply hatred, though hatred is present. It is also fear. It is the terror of a people who have been told that the structure they built their survival on is being dismantled by people in Washington who have never lived inside it and will not be there when it falls.

Right or wrong, and we will sit with that question, that fear is real. And Harper Lee doesn’t clean it up or make it easy to dismiss. She plants it the room and steps back.

Atticus Finch is a product of this period, a man of the 1950s South, with everything that means and everything it costs him and everyone around him.

Jean Louise is also a product of this period but she has been away. New York has given her a different formation and now she has come home, and the period is going to demand something of her that New York never prepared her for.

Dimension Two: Duration in Maycomb

One Week

Go Set a Watchman covers about a week and that compression is not accidental. It is the engine of the story’s violence. There is no slow build here, no years of gradual revelation. In just one week, Jean Louise Finch discovers that the foundation of her entire moral life is not what she thought it was and she has to decide who she is without the person who taught her who to be.

Think about what that compression does to a reader. And to a character.

Duration determines how much time a character has to change and how much time they have to resist change. One week is not enough time to process what Jean Louise is going through and that’s the point. Just like the South, she doesn’t get to process but instead must live inside the shattering in real time and make decisions about who she is. This is why the book feels so raw and uncomfortable. It was written that way. The duration creates a pressure cooker. There is nowhere to go, no time to breathe, and no relief (which is how many Southerners felt with such profound change crashing down on them). Maycomb holds her. The week holds her. And the story holds her and refuses to let her leave until she has become something.

Dimension Three – Location

Maycomb, Alabama

Lee’s description of Maycomb in To Kill a Mockingbird is so good it deserves to be read aloud to anyone who wants to understand what location can do in a story. She writes that Maycomb was an old town, a tired town, that people moved slowly, that the days were twenty-four hours long but they seemed longer, and that there was nowhere to go and no money to get there.

In Go Set a Watchman that same town is present but now is seen by someone who has been somewhere else. And that double vision is really everything. When you have only ever lived in one place, that place is invisible to you. It is your world and your normal. Jean Louise grew up in Maycomb and Maycomb shaped her in ways she cannot see and in ways that her New York life has not undone, whatever she thinks. But now she can see it. Now she has the distance to look at it and name it. And what she sees troubles her.

So, the physical location of Maycomb does several things simultaneously in this story.

First, it is inescapable. There is no neutral ground. Every street, every building, every face belongs to a history that Jean Louise cannot step outside of. The courthouse where she sees Atticus is the same courthouse where, as we will discover in To Kill a Mockingbird, he defended Tom Robinson. The same balcony. The same room. History lives in the location and it will not be dismissed.

Second, it is communal in a way that New York is not. Maycomb knows everything about everyone. There is no privacy here in the modern sense. Your business is the town’s business. Your choices reflect on your family. Your father’s choices reflect on you. The location produces a density of relationship and accountability that is both its great strength and its suffocating limitation.

Third, and this is the one that matters most for the conscience teaching. Maycomb is a place where everyone is watching everyone. The title of the book comes from Isaiah. Go set a watchman, let him declare what he sees. In Maycomb, everyone is the watchman. Everyone is watching and being watched. There is no hiding. Which means that when Jean Louise’s watchman, her internal moral compass, collapses, she collapses in public, and the place that knows her best sees and will remember it longest.

Dimension Four – The Level of Conflict

Remember this handout? This conversation? How McKee teaches that the level of conflict in a story’s setting determines the scale of what the characters must face?

In Go Set a Watchman the levels of conflict are stacked just as you’ve expect when you study this page of the hardcover. Like geological strata where each layer presses down on the one below it.

At the outermost level is the extra-personal conflicts of historical and political conflict, individuals in society and the physical environment. The Civil Rights movement is beginning. Federal intervention is coming. The white South is organizing its resistance. Citizens’ Councils are forming. The macro-level conflict of American history is arriving in Maycomb whether Maycomb wants it or not. And as written above, Maycomb is choosing sides. Old relationships are being tested. Who you sit with at a Citizens’ Council meeting is a declaration. Where you stand is visible. The community is hardening into positions. Sound familiar? Are we not living these times right now? And doing the same because we’ve been forced into this position?

Inside that is personal conflicts. Family. Friends. Lovers. Jean Louise and Atticus are on different sides of something neither of them can fully articulate to the other. The father-daughter relationship, which has been the most important relationship in Jean Louise’s life fractures along the fault lines that the historical moment has opened up.

And at the innermost level of body, mind and emotions, Jean Louise must occupy herself. This is the level that matters most. This is where the hero makes the choice and asks the crucial question: Who am I when the person I built my identity on turns out to be human?

The Setting as Destiny

Maycomb did not create Atticus’s limitations. But Maycomb made them visible in the way that only a specific time and place and pressure can. If Jean Louise had stayed in New York she would have kept her borrowed conscience intact indefinitely. The borrowed conscience survives as long as it is never tested. Maycomb is then the test. This is what McKee means when he says setting becomes destiny. Maycomb was always going to do this to Jean Louise Finch. The only question was whether she would survive it as the same person, or as someone finally, terribly, gloriously her own.

Next time we find out more.

🤔 Question to consider:

As we walk in to the room and discuss setting how are you leaning into setting in your own work?

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