The Developmental Editing Program

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BLACKBIRD WRITING STUDIO

The Developmental Editing Program

By the time a writer reaches this tier, they have done something rare: they have stayed. Through the Bones of Storytelling, through the curated workshop, through the thirty-week formation. They have committed to the long game.

This is close, collaborative, professional work. What traditional publishing once offered its writers — a devoted editor who loves the work and understands what it is trying to become — is what this program provides. The result is not a polished draft. It is a manuscript ready to meet the world.

 

PART ONE

The Full Manuscript Read

Offered seasonally · Limited availability · Enrolled students only

Before a writer can know where their manuscript needs to go, someone who understands story at the deepest level must read the whole of it with developmental eyes — tracking structure, arc, character, thematic coherence, narrative momentum, and the singular logic of this particular book.

Jennifer reads the complete manuscript, then produces a written assessment covering:

STRENGTHS

What is already working and must be protected.

RECOMMENDATIONS

Specific, actionable guidance grounded in craft — plot, character, structure.

WEAKNESSES

Where the work is losing the reader or losing itself.

THE PLAN AHEAD

A clear roadmap for the revision work that follows.

The written assessment is followed by a 90-minute debrief conversation. The writer leaves with the map and the compass.

PRICING

Manuscript length Rate Price
Up to 120,000 words $78/hour $750
Over 120,000 words $78/hour (~13,000 words/hr) $750 + $78 per additional hour

Example: A 150,000-word manuscript is approximately 2.3 hours over the base. Total: approximately $925.

Availability: The Full Manuscript Read opens in June. Spots are limited and fill early. Writers wishing to begin fall term with a clear revision plan are encouraged to book summer reads by May.

The Full Manuscript Read is optional — not a prerequisite for ongoing sessions. Writers may enter the one-on-one program directly. That said, for writers bringing a complete manuscript, the Read is the most efficient starting point and ensures every subsequent session is pulling in the same direction.

PART TWO

Ongoing One-on-One Sessions

This is the engine of the Developmental Editing Program.

Working session by session, at a word count that matches the writer’s pace and project, Jennifer reads, marks, and thinks with each writer about their pages — then meets with them to work through what has been found. Every session includes Jennifer’s full developmental reading of the submitted pages, written line and craft notes, and a 60–90 minute conversation. Nothing is generic. Everything is specific to this writer, this manuscript, this moment in the work.

Writers choose the word count tier that fits their pace and revision stage. Higher word counts move the manuscript forward faster; smaller word counts allow deeper work on complex or early-draft material. Tiers may be adjusted between sessions.

OPTION A – SINGLE SESSIONS

For writers who want one-on-one attention without a full-year commitment. Sessions booked as calendar availability allows. No guaranteed spot.

Word count Per session
Up to 6,000 words $335
Up to 3,500 words $215
Up to 2,500 words $175

OPTION B – 20 SESSION COMMITMENT

A guaranteed place on Jennifer’s calendar throughout the year, plus a 10% reduction on the per-session rate. Recommended for writers working toward agent submission. Five spots per year.

Word count Per session 20-session total
Up to 6,000 words $300 $6,000
Up to 3,500 words $195 $3,900
Up to 2,500 words $155 $3,100

Sessions run every other week during the school year (September–May), in tandem with workshop attendance. Payment plans and scheduling modifications available by arrangement.

 

THE DESTINATION

The Arc of This Work

Writers do not come to this program in a hurry. Those who reach this tier have typically been developing their craft and manuscript at Blackbird for two to four years. They arrive because the work is ready — or almost ready — to become what it actually is.

The Developmental Editing Program is the last leg of a long formation. Its destination is agent-readiness.

Jennifer has established relationships with agents who have committed to reading Blackbird writers. A writer does not leave this program until the manuscript is ready to be seen. That is not a sales promise. It is a standard


ENROLLMENT

Open to enrolled Blackbird students by invitation or inquiry.

To discuss whether this program is the right next step for your work, reach out directly.

jclauck@gmail.com

“The Studio is built for writers serious about the long game.”